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 21:35 | 29/Jun/2008 | 4 Comment(s)
SHIKVA

|| Shikve bhi Hazar hai Shikayat bhi bohat hai
       Iss Dil ko magar ussey Mohabbat bhi bohat hai
Aa jata hai milne vo Tassavoor mein Hamare
Ek Shakhs ki itni si Inayat bhi bohat hai… ||

Vivek

29.06.08

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 17:41 | 29/Jun/2008 | 0 Comment(s)
YAAD

|| usko chaaha bhi to ikrar karna nahi aaya

umr beet gae magar pyar karna nahi aaya

usne maanga bhi kuch to judaae maangi

aur hame inkaar karna nahi aaya...||

|| kuch lamho k liye aa jaao vaapus,hum dil ki kahani kah denge

samjhe naa tum aankhon se jo vo baat jubaani kah denge

jindaagee ek saza ho gae hai,tere gum me is kadar ko gae hai

tum aa jaao vaapus ye gujarish hai meri,mujhe tumhari aadat ho gae hai ...||

29.06.08

 

 

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 02:33 | 9/Jun/2008 | 4 Comment(s)
DUNIYA

"Donon jahan teri mohabbat mein haar ke
woh ja raha hai koi shab gham guzar ke
weeran hai mae-kada khum-o-sagar udas hain
tum kiya gaye ke rooth gaye din bahar ke
ik fursat gunah mili woh bhi char din
dekhe hain hum ne hausle parwardigar ke
dunya ne teri yaad se be-gana kerdiya
tughe se bhi dil-fareb hain gham rozgar ke"

 

09/06/08

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 02:17 | 9/Jun/2008 | 3 Comment(s)
K3G

"Aansu mein naa dhundhna hame,hum tumhe aankhon mein mil jaayenge,tamanna ho agar milne ki to band aankhon se bhi nazar aaenge…"

"Agar Hum Na hote to Gazal kaun Kehta?
Aapke Chehare ko kamal Kaun Kahata Yeto Karishma hai Mohabbat Ka,Warna Patthar ki Divar ko Tajmahal kaun kahata…”

 

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 21:12 | 2/Jun/2008 | 2 Comment(s)
RAIGARH

"RAIGARH"

NAAVAKIF...ANJAANA...ABUJ PAHEKI SA EK NAAM BAHUT SE LOGON KE LIYE...HAAN YE EK SHAHAR HAI UN LOGON K LIYE JINKI PAHCHAAN US SHAHAR KI UNCHI IMARAT SE YA KI UNKI JAGTI RAATON SE HOTI HAI...LAKIN MAI BAAT KAR RAHA HUN "RAIGARH" KI JAHAAN MAINE APNI AANKHEN KHOLI,REGNA,CHALNA AUR FIR DOUDNA SEEKHA...BAHAT KE NAKSHE PER YE AK SHAHAR BHAR HO YA KI HAWRA-MUMBAI KE BEECH KA AK CHOTA SA SHAHAR...PER MERE LIYE TO YE JANNAT SE KAM NAHI..YAHAAN LOGON K PAAS FURSAT HAI...AMAN AB TAK KAAYAM HAI..YAHAAN KI HAWA ME AK ALHADPAN AK MASTI HAI...YAHAN PYAR HAI HER KISI K LIYE...

MAI US SE JISE ALAG-ALAG LOG ALAG-ALAG NAAM SE JAANTE AUR YAAD KARTE HAIN US SE YAHI MAANGUNGA VO HER MUSIBAT SE MERE SHAHAR KO MAHFOOZ RAKHE ISE HER BURI NAZAR SE BACHAE...

AUR JAB MERE JAANE KA WAQT AAE TO MAI ISI MITTI ME MILUN JAHAAN SE MAINE REGNA,CHALNA AUR FIR DOUDNA SEEKHA...

VIVEK PATNAIK

3.6.2008

RAIGARH

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 02:54 | 8/May/2008 | 3 Comment(s)
DUNIYA

MAANA KI TU BHOOL GAI

TERI YE NA FITRAT THI...

KUCH DUNIYA NE BAHLAYA HOGA

KUCH APNO NE SAMJHAAYA HOGA....

VIVEK PATNAIK

07/05/08

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 02:38 | 8/May/2008 | 3 Comment(s)
AI MAALIK TERE BANDE

YAAR MAINE JO YE  LIKHA HAI USE MERE DADA JEE NE MERE PAPA KO BATAYA THA AUR MERE PAPA NE MUJHE…


YE AK BAHUT POORANE CINEMA”2 AANKHEN 12 HAATH” KA GAANA HAI….


 


"AI MAALIK TERE BANDE HUM


AISE HO HAMARE KARAM


NEKI PER CHALEN AUR BADI SE TALE


TAKI HASTE HUE NIKLE NIKLE DUM …


YE ANDHERA GHANA CHAA RAHA


TERA INSAAN GHABRA RAHA


HO RAHA BE-KHABAR , KUCH NAA AATA NAZAR


SUKH KA SURAJ DUBA JAA RAHA


HAI TERI ROSHNI ME JO DAM


TU AMAVAS KO KAR DE POONAM


NEKI PER CHALE AUR…..


JAB JULMO KA HO SAAMNA


TUB TU HI HAME THAAMNA


VO BURAI KAREN,HUM BHALAI KAREN


NAHI BADLE KI HO BHAVANA


BAD CHALE PYAR KA HER KADAM


AUR MITE BAIR KA YE BHARAM


PER TU JO KHADA HAI DAYALU BADA


TERI KIRPA SE DHARI THAMI


DIYA TUNE HAME JAB JANAM


TU HI HER LEGA HUM SAB K GUM…


AI MAALIK TERE BANDE HUM…"


 


VIVEK PATNAIK

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 02:35 | 25/Apr/2008 | 8 Comment(s)
FAASLA

 

|| FAASLA AISA BHI HOGA KABHI SOCHA NAHI THA

SAAMNE BITHA THA MERE AUR VO MERA NA THA…

VO KHUSBU KI TARAH FAILA THA MERE HER AUR

MAI USE MAHSOOS KAR SAKTA THA, CHU SAKTA NA THA…

RAAT BHAR US KI HI AAHAT KAAN ME AATI RAHI

JHAANK KAR DEKHA, GALI ME KOI AAYA NA THA…

AKS TO MOUJOOD THA PER AKS TANHAI KE THE

AINA TO MOUJOOD THA MAGAR USME TERA CHEHRA NA THA…

AAJ US NE DARD BHI APNA ALHADAA KAR DIYA

AAJ MAI ROYA TO MERE SAATH VO ROYA NA THA…

YE SABHI VEERANIYA  US K JUDA HONE SE THI

AANKH DUNDHLAI HUI THI SHAHAR DHUDHLAYA NA THA…

YAAD KARNE SE TAKLEEF TO HOTI THI MAGAR

BHOOL JAANE K SIVA KOI CHAARA NAA THA…||

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 03:01 | 24/Apr/2008 | 4 Comment(s)
PEENA BHUL GAE

MAINE YE LINE AK PEENEWAALE SE SUNI AUR VAAKAI MAI USKA MUREED HO GAYA... BAAKI KUCH TO SAMAJH ME NAHI AAYA BUS "SURAHI"AK LAFZ SAMAJH ME AAYA...

"AJNABEE SAHAR K AJNBEE RAASTE,MERI TANHAAI PE MUSSKURATE RAHE 

MAI BAHOT DOOR TAK YUN HI YUN HI CHALTA RAHA...VO BAHOT DER TAK YAAD AATE RAHE.."

JINDAGEE BHI HAME AAJMAATI RAHI

AUR HUM BHI ISE AAJMAATE RAHE..."

VIVEK

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 03:26 | 15/Mar/2008 | 6 Comment(s)
INTAZAAR

“MOHABBAT ME JAHAAN EKRAAR KI POORI UMMED HOTI HAI VAHAAN BHI DIL EZHAAR KARNE SE DARTA HAI…AUR TUJHE TO YE BHI NAHI MAADAR KI VO TERE IZHAAR KA AITBAAR BHI KAR PAAYEGEE YA NAHI…DIL PE MERE MERA IKTAYAAR BHI NAHI HAI AUR NAA HI AITBAAR…BUS TUMHARE HAAN KA INTAZAAR HAI….“

 VIVEK PATNAIK 8/3/08

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